Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep due to this.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
describe the problem with the dog
explain why it is important for you to sleep
outline what your neighbours could do about the situation
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to complain about your dog. I have been trying to reach to you from many days but I was unsuccessful. The primary issue is related to his uninterrupted barking at night. I would like you to do something for it immediately.
I have joined with a new employer recently and working on their peculiar project which requires me to contemplate on their valuable marketing strategies. However, your dog incessantly loud bark doesn't allow me to sleep. In addition, all the other stray dogs gathered in front of main door and keeps barking which made us uncomfortable to take a sound sleep.
Would it be possible for you to keep him indoor for a handful of days? The hot weather might be causing the issue by which he feels infuriated all the time and keep barking. You can also enroll him in a newly opened animal healthcare center in downtown, Dogs Home. I love dogs more than anything but I hope you understand my situation and you can co-operate in it.
I am waiting for your actions on this matter.
Your's Sincerely
Apoorva Chikara
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| 2019-06-13 | Apoorva Chikara | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this letter to complain about your dog. I have been trying to reach to you from m...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...However, your dog incessantly loud bark doesnt allow me to sleep. In addition, all the...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65989847716 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6320861601 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6047278351 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319083783946 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102326355764 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779960176952 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183725407807 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761055208277 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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