Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal,
Good morning,
I've recently received your complain letter about very loudly sound that's coming from my flat these days. As you may already know before, I've had water leakage on the kitchen and bathroom pipes. Therefore, I contacted a plumper team to fix this issue badly. However, as this issue is extremely urgent and important, they are working intensively to complete it as soon as possible.
Thus, I really would like to apologise about this temporary situation, but honestly, I have no other choices,but solve this problem. Since, if I ignore this issue, it will definitely affect you later on your water circulation or it might cause a fire.
Anyhow, I would like to promise you to hire one more plumper team in order to accelerate their performance. moreover, I will tell them to start their working after you leaving your homes.
finally, please accept my sincere apologise for this short-term condition.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ahamad
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, Ive re...
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Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jamal
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, Ive recently receiv...
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Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, Ive recently received yo...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, Ive recently received your complain lett...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, Ive recently received your complain letter ...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...complain letter about very loudly sound thats coming from my flat these days. As you ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...e days. As you may already know before, Ive had water leakage on the kitchen and ba...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...n, but honestly, I have no other choices,but solve this problem. Since, if I ignore ...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r circulation or it might cause a fire. Anyhow, I would like to promise you to h...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
... order to accelerate their performance. moreover, I will tell them to start their workin...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r working after you leaving your homes. finally, please accept my sincere apolog...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...king after you leaving your homes. finally, please accept my sincere apologise for...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pologise for this short-term condition. Best regards Bilal
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt-term condition. Best regards Bilal
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Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dition. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, honestly, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19496855346 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5952828474 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729559748428 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1027699768 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202862542352 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665919402998 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716299257036 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889142060542 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636780689085 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.