If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. What is your opinion?
There is no doubt that our recent life become highly intricate due to various people’s behaviour toward their surrounded environment. Nevertheless, in terms of enhance the quality of life on our planet, individuals should amend their attitude against our planet. I wholeheartedly concur with this statement and this essay will discuss this pivotal topic in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it’s irrefutable that a plethora of serious complications and disaster are attributed to the human activities. Firstly, plenty of animals and plants have recently extinct due to deforestation. For instance, Syria was known as a green land. there were lots of rivers, forests and natural lakes in their cities. However, the dramatic increase of the population in the last few years, enforced the government to clear a wide area of trees and build up alternatively various houses. As a result of such detrimental situation, lots of lakes and rivers have been completely drought. Moreover, the climate has drastically changed due to this issue. The weather temperature of Syria has risen conspicuously during the last years. Thus, it’s extremely integral for government and people to find effective solutions that mitigate this matter in the future.
In addition, pollution has become a trendy issue these days. Many nations in fact are suffering from such a dangerous issue since a long time, as it may trigger lots of diseases that attack human, plants and animals. take Lebanon as an example. Lebanon is listed on the top countries of air pollution. The reason why they are on the paramount of highly polluted nations is burning their waste and garbage. this indeed, affect the clarity of air and culprit on all creatures’s health.
To sum up, people should take an immediate action toward their environment in order to save the life on the planet in the upcoming days. this only be happened by desperately change their attitude toward their planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26479750779 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86847722765 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610591900312 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0223974148 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114402862649 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297345472119 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450152048587 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718420958888 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518598342632 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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