Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am penning down this epistle regarding a worsening problem with the available parking spots for the employees.
During the last three months, finding a free parking spot has become a serious issue as a new shopping mall has been opened close by. Many have to look for a free spot for even more than 30 minutes, which causes frustration and devastation among them. Nevertheless, I believe this issue is resolvable by changing the first floor to parking as it is absolutely empty and has not been used in the last three years.
This can help employees to locate a free spot faster and as a result, will increase their job satisfaction. In addition, it will increase their safety as it will be a place inside the building which is more secure. I hope you react as soon as you receive this letter.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 61 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 56 | view |
| 2019-12-11 | Sorena Eshkoor | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87741935484 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58101610237 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5966359558 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140704844335 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537386551946 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288203761975 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611582627374 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387671050849 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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