Your organising a family party and you want to invite a friend.
1 state the party is abt.
2 What the party plans are
3 Why it is important for him/her to come.
Dear Tom,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m just writing to invite you to come and join my son’s party this saturday night.
As you’ve already known, my son, Jack, graduated from university last week and he’ll soon become a real doctor so I’d like to throw a party to celebrate his hard work which has made me really proud all this time. it’s also his birthday this saturday so it’ll be a two-in-one party.
About the plan, it’s going to be a simple barbeque party in my backyard. my wife will prepare a lot of beef, which is your favorite, and tuna specially shipped from her home in Vung Tau. We’ll gather around at my house at 7 pm and everyone is welcomed to have a toast to my boy before we start the party.
I know that you’re not going to skip my son’s big celebration because you’ve been the best uncle he’s ever had. Trust me, he loves you more than he loves me. What’s more, you’ve always been a good friend to me and we’re both too busy to catch up with each other lately. so, your presence is very important, my friend.
I look really look forward to seeing you soon.
All the best,
Truong
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| 2019-07-27 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-24 | Pallvi singla | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...has made me really proud all this time. it's also his birthday this saturday so it...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...a simple barbeque party in my backyard. my wife will prepare a lot of beef, which ...
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Line 9, column 209, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...loves me. What's more, you've always been a good friend to me and we're both...
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Line 9, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...usy to catch up with each other lately. so, your presence is very important, my fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56531902071 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7176244627 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122992295293 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546543657571 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516357162288 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801150688772 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043163320532 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.