Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:– Explain what caused the damage.– Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?– What needs to be done to fix it?

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Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:
– Explain what caused the damage.
– Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
– What needs to be done to fix it?

Dear Mary,

Last week’s inclement weather wrecked huge damage to almost all coastal properties in Cox's Bazar. However, the damage to my house was much more severe and it needs to be urgently repaired.

Strong blizzard winds from the Bay 'Of Bengal' a heavy blow to the city’s infrastructure in general and to this house in particular. The storm somehow ruptured the outer walls and destroyed a portion of the house’s heating system. Consequently, the living room’s and bathroom’s heating systems are out of order. Moreover, a few wide cracks have appeared in the house’s roof.

Since it is icy cold outside and damage in the structure are dangerous, I believe you need to urgently fix this issue. Please call an expert plumber contractor and a construction contractor, and get the work estimation as early as possible. I am sure the property is insured against damage caused by weather. The insurance company will release the funds immediately.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sartaj.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'systems'' or 'system's'?
Suggestion: systems'; system's
...y fix this issue. Please call a heating systems contractor and a construction contracto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, in general, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99044534143 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704402515723 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7721168972 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5454545455 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108668976093 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407059591407 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052308607301 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703182128427 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527393944407 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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