Being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports person personally brings problem as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems ?
It is indeed fact that with the advent of modern era being a famous personality has merits as well as demerits . Today, I am going to scrutinize to this given statement in this piece of writing .
On the brighter side there are multifarious reasons but the first and foremost is the lavishlife of elites. For example , aristocrats have big luxurious houses and cars. They enjoy life very much however, they can roam wonderful placees . Secondly, elites became role model for society. youth want to be like them . They also start association or start various types of programs to help poor people. As, celebrities are ideal for their fans so, they have responsibility that they tech lessons of decency and purity.
On the darker side their are also many reasons but main is the interference of media and people in the life of aristocrat.Media infiltrate their personal matters which seems to insecure .Aristocrat donot have privacy in their life.
For instance , they cannot roam public places as others . Even, their small actions notice very closely . Secondly, elites are usually busy in work hardly mange to have some free time. They do not have much freedom.
To conclude after weighing all the above arguments up against each other there are equal number of merits and demerits .But , I personally, believe that being a celebrity is double edge sword.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238095238095 0.247107548796 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.174603174603 0.15552993741 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0952380952381 0.0946569551029 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0714285714286 0.0501201869031 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0634920634921 0.0437536398559 145% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.122223957237 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0403219363162 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65372228127 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.0326786765898 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00396825396825 0.00163938923432 242% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0861751148067 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00793650793651 0.0214082191602 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00396825396825 0.0119246538136 33% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1369.0 1933.38276553 71% => OK
No of words: 234.0 316.052104208 74% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82553191489 6.10592293882 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20519365927 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311965811966 0.37474360046 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217948717949 0.284197041944 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141025641026 0.203843217982 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0897435897436 0.137313986986 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65372228127 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65811965812 0.560935902166 117% => OK
Word variations: 73.8287952458 60.7401812628 122% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0911823647 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6 20.7725350517 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3953066604 49.5273876611 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4698795181 93.4120437189 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0963855422 15.2821509519 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722891566265 0.594174754866 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01102204409 359% => Too many language errors. Double check essay format, grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.3948717949 49.1922392462 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.21794871795 1.69127372897 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.0964639644609 0.332604825255 29% => More coherence wanted between essay topic and essay body.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0289010566998 0.102734651613 28% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0410111292304 0.0668474354756 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.480624891167 0.534917948617 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.236275735977 0.148666948902 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345105674563 0.13441755203 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056340404232 0.0742828286743 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.131385115814 0.324241079732 41% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0832840967604 0.0640056729886 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647780818572 0.22793763319 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487323563373 0.0582452615562 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41883767535 175% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.88977955912 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.00200400802 200% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.493987976 105% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.0 Out of 9