The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger driver and to lower the age limit for elderly ones. Do you agree?
Nowadays we must acknowledge that the number of car casualties has been rapidly growing. Some people hold the opinion that the government should increase the age requirements for the young driver as well as to decrease the age limit of the elderly. Doing so, they assume would help to reduce the amount of car accidents on the road.
Furthermore, it is generally accepted that teenager and older drivers are involved in far more crashes and highway fatalities than any other age group. In fact, according to the latest surveys done in America, car crashes are the number 1 killer of teens, wh...
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