Birth rate has begun to fall alarmingly in many developed countries today. In modern societies, birth rates have significantly decreased and they say that by 2030, the elderly population in developed countries will outgrow the young generation. It is clear that this issue will definitely impact on these states in every aspect of their lives if those forecasts would come true.
This phenomenon may affect many things negatively. For example, it could expand the aging population and the youth may not be given a chance to seek jobs that are already held by senior citizens. Therefore, economic pr...
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