As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways.
What are the main difference between young children's social behavior and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
Regard as social developments the opinions and the realities of life seem different in children and adults point of view. These developments push forward children and adults to change their way of thinking and especially teach them how to behave as clever as possible. I personally agree that both adults and children have their specific behaviors which strictly different from each other.
The first main point is that children are more openly contact with other members of public, which gives them more confidence and reliability. Children can readily cope with any complexes, which may always pretend them from their growing relationships. They do not feel any vital responsibility to think and take an action about it. Comparing with children, adults are a bit different. They just passed the period of childhood and hardly understood their responsibilities and manners in social world. In this way, sometimes adults barely talk about their feelings to others. They are keen to remain inscrutable and do not be attractive as far as possible. In addition, adults differ from children not only psychologically but also physically.
As child growth into adult, the importance in social life faces with revolution. Therefore, after the certain period the unparallel contributions of adults to the society show itself in every social movement. The experiences of adults also show itself creating an remarkable advantages for government as well. Just because they act like a top dog in any field of job in order to solving any major problem without any difficulty.
To draw conclusion, every person have an invaluable role in our growing society. Nevertheless, from my perspective both adults and children’s behavior will vary over times, however, it is natural and has both benefits and drawbacks.
in order to solving any major problem
in order to solve any major problems
every person have an invaluable role
every person has an invaluable role
Sentence: Therefore, after the certain period the unparallel contributions of adults to the society show itself in every social movement.
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