The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have a several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that is continuous throughout life.
As we are now living in a modern world, It is amazing how life gets busy and people get busier. Doing multiple jobs and having additional education for all walks of life has become the latest trend, while, people with one profession seem to be out of touch in our time. Since many people prefer to earn money by doing various jobs or take further education, regardless of their age and background, they hold the opinion that having one particular work is boring. I believe that working in one chosen career is more beneficial and rewarding.
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
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No. of Words: 428 350
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No. of Different Words: 221 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.548 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.626 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.466 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 7.653 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
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