Many people think that money brings happiness, but others think that having too much money is a problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Money is an indispensable aspect of our daily life because almost everything people need ,from food to services, vacations, cars, etc, usually is paid by money. Nowadays it is quite often to hear people said the more money you have the happier you are. However, those opponents who argue that having too much money comes with many problems. In the essay, I am going to examine from both sides and try to reach a conclusion.
On one side of the argument there are people who believe money can solve many troubles, which makes lives easier. For example, people need money to cover their basic expen...
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