Nowadays more people choose to move out from the area where they grew up, in a search for a better job. Do you think there are more advantages than disadvantages to this development? Why?

Recently, everyone keeps on migrating around the globe especially when they are looking for a better opportunities in life like jobs or anything that would probably give them a security of tenure. This essay will discuss the two sides of the argument.

Let us take a look at the negative effects that this situation may bring. For instance, a person that had grew up in a country side. By the time he finishes college he needed to moved to the city to find a job. As a result, he must try to adjust to a new environment that he is in at the moment since, he is used to a lyfestyle in a rural area, ...

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Sentence: As a result, he must try to adjust to a new environment that he is in at the moment since, he is used to a lyfestyle in a rural area, and parents and siblings were around him most of the time to take care of him in any challenges.
Error: lyfestyle Suggestion: lifestyle

Sentence: Conceivably, this has a great contribution to anyones development.
Error: anyones Suggestion: anyone's

Sentence: In sum, there is an optimistic and pessimistic reasons in transfering from a place we grew in to an area where we will be having our employment.
Error: transfering Suggestion: transferring

Sentence: Others may even considered this as a challenge, but as long as we keep that burning desire within ourselves to be positive and blitheful.
Error: blitheful Suggestion: No alternate word

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