People believe that they should be able to keep all money they earn and sould not pay tax to the state.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about to save they are salary to live in future, because some people have plan to their live like as to cost education they children or healthy. While I agree to give money to government. I believe that goverment use the money to public service.
Some people, with they save salary every month to fund education their children to high level, to get good education the parent must be additional lesson to their children. It have need cost more greaters. This problem more difficult if the have many children.
in live, every one not prediction how they live. For example sometime the people have accident or sick, so they need bigger fund to care they health. If they save money, it difficult to process this case.
On the other hand, I can undertand the arguments why the people give money to government. Because the government need budget to cover public service. For example, the state necessary budget to developt education, healtcare, and infrastructur. The project can not realisation if no help money from society. Because the government not enough to fulfill this program. Every year the governmen spent 30% to edication, 20 % to healtcare, 50% to infrastructur and other. To operate it, the government using money from people, which it tax pay by people every year.
In conclution, they are good reasons why the people must save money and give money to governmet, because that have help all people and it kind of way to carry as the government.
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Sentence: People have different views about to save they are salary to live in future, because some people have plan to their live like as to cost education they children or healthy.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and children
Sentence: I believe that goverment use the money to public service.
Description: The fragment goverment use the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace use with verb, past tense
Sentence: Some people, with they save salary every month to fund education their children to high level, to get good education the parent must be additional lesson to their children.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to with and they
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to education and their
Sentence: in live, every one not prediction how they live.
Description: The tag a Start of sentence is not usually followed by in
Suggestion: Refer to start of sentence and in
Sentence: For example sometime the people have accident or sick, so they need bigger fund to care they health.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and health
Sentence: If they save money, it difficult to process this case.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to it and difficult
Description: The word process is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to process
Sentence: For example, the state necessary budget to developt education, healtcare, and infrastructur.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to state and necessary
Sentence: To operate it, the government using money from people, which it tax pay by people every year.
Description: The word tax is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to tax
Sentence: In conclution, they are good reasons why the people must save money and give money to governmet, because that have help all people and it kind of way to carry as the government.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a WH-pronoun, nominative
Suggestion: Refer to because and that
Description: The fragment have help all is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past participle
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to it and kind
Sentence: I believe that goverment use the money to public service.
Error: goverment Suggestion: government
Sentence: It have need cost more greaters.
Error: greaters Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: On the other hand, I can undertand the arguments why the people give money to government.
Error: undertand Suggestion: understand
Sentence: For example, the state necessary budget to developt education, healtcare, and infrastructur.
Error: healtcare Suggestion: heal care
Error: infrastructur Suggestion: infrastructure
Error: developt Suggestion: develop
Sentence: The project can not realisation if no help money from society.
Error: realisation Suggestion: realization
Sentence: Every year the governmen spent 30 to edication, 20 to healtcare, 50 to infrastructur and other.
Error: healtcare Suggestion: heal care
Error: edication Suggestion: education
Error: infrastructur Suggestion: infrastructure
Error: governmen Suggestion: government
Sentence: In conclution, they are good reasons why the people must save money and give money to governmet, because that have help all people and it kind of way to carry as the government.
Error: governmet Suggestion: government
Error: conclution Suggestion: conclusion
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No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 253 350
No. of Characters: 1187 1500
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.988 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.692 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.41 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.188 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
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