All over the years, society and values are dramatically changed: wellness, money and power became the new Gods of the world and social status and material possessions seem to be the indicators for judging a person’s worth.
This is the reason why some people feel values like honour have been buried with past times and probably they are not wrong: nowadays there are really few occasions to show who we are and our qualities.
Furthermore, the society affects our lives and way of thinking especially throw the media: a recent research showed that, the doll “Barbie” as doctor had a major...
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