Prevention is better than cure. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures?
"Health is Wealth". Being in the Third World country, our government is providing money to sustain the needs of the people in the field of Education, Culture and Arts, Livelihood programs, and most especially to Health which acquires the biggest revenue. I strongly believe that our nation should give priority to the preventive measures like health education to the society and community programs, immunizations in the barangays to be conducted by the Barangay Health workers, and public awareness rather than the Management and Treatment of illnesses.
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The only flaw is: Avg.
The only flaw is:
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.462 21.0
Some sentences are long. But it is not serious.
How's the coherence and
How's the coherence and cohesion of my essay?
They are very
They are very good:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
In addition to this is that our political leaders should provide a budget for free immunizations
In addition to this, our political leaders should provide a budget for free immunizations
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 2107 1500
No. of Different Words: 228 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.321 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.935 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 138 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 103 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 70 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.509 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5