Some people are reducing their walks, however, many health experts say that walking is the best exercise to maintain health. Why do people walk less? What might encourage people to walk longer distances?
Engaging in regular exercise is essential for the body. Among all types of exercise, walking is considered as the simplest and easiest form that can be very beneficial to one's health. However nowadays, it seems like people are getting tired of it that some walks only a few distances while others do not walk at all when they go out of their houses.
There are several reasons why most people are not able to do walking for longer miles. Firstly, it is because of environmental issues. In some countries, a high level of pollution is present as too many cars and factories emit toxic fumes in the ...
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