Some people believe that fast food industry is destroying the health, family easting timings and environment.
Do you agree/disagree. Give your opinion and examples.
In recent years, fast food industry, like other cuisines have become extremely popular. While some people believe that this is a good thing, other nutritionists have claimed that it has an overwhelmingly detrimental impact on people. I believe there would be dreadful consequences if fast foods were to be encouraged mainly due to the obesity and disturbed family eating routines. In this essay, i shall draw upon a number of studies in cognitive science to reveal the negative effects of this phenomenon.
To begin with, fast food consumption is a factor of utmost importance, which has led to sur...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280235988201 0.247107548796 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.176991150442 0.15552993741 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766961651917 0.0946569551029 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176991150442 0.0437536398559 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129793510324 0.122223957237 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0442477876106 0.0403219363162 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75566906485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.023598820059 0.0326786765898 72% => OK
Particles: 0.00294985250737 0.00163938923432 180% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796460176991 0.0861751148067 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00884955752212 0.0214082191602 41% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.0119246538136 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1849.0 1933.38276553 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.052104208 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18394648829 6.10592293882 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20519365927 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406040268456 0.37474360046 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285234899329 0.284197041944 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181208053691 0.203843217982 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11744966443 0.137313986986 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75566906485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.560935902166 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.2399742251 60.7401812628 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0911823647 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.625 20.7725350517 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7141080307 49.5273876611 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2165605096 93.4120437189 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1847133758 15.2821509519 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.509554140127 0.594174754866 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 47.1484899329 49.1922392462 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.79069767442 1.69127372897 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.306128420346 0.332604825255 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102570871317 0.102734651613 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0616168271005 0.0668474354756 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.488855375113 0.534917948617 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0939533826284 0.148666948902 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123386983821 0.13441755203 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547340917774 0.0742828286743 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.321335457489 0.324241079732 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0324574098593 0.0640056729886 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219805472067 0.22793763319 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433703686728 0.0582452615562 74% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Too many negative sentences.
sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.60220440882 269% => Too many negative topic words.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 10.493987976 133% => OK
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Rates: 80.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9