All over the world it is widely accepted that respecting to customs and behaviour of other countries is a matter of importance. However there are several visions about choosing the way which people do that.
Some people are advocate of considering the host country's culture. so that every society set up their rules based on their customs and cultures, it is duty of tourists to respect them, to be prohibited of disturbing and breaking low in host country.
For instance, in our country that is an Islamic society, the other country's visitors must follow the dress code like covering, otherwise they have not the right of entrance.
other vision regard the respect as a right for visitors firstly and consider them more important than host country. They claim that tourists should feel free to choosing their manner and to be welcomed for their different cultures.
from the point of my view, there should be an alternative law toward tourists. And both countries should accept a norm that don't lead to spoilting the rights of visitors and people who are living in host country. In this way, the less strictness for visitors would be considered and also they can not disturb the local rules.
To sum up, always there will be a third way to conduct world to the sound relationships, where all of people with different cultures could get along well with each other, share culture and even transmit and show their customs to all around the world.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: pratiksha ghimire
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'for instance', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226765799257 0.247107548796 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.152416356877 0.15552993741 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0780669144981 0.0946569551029 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0520446096654 0.0437536398559 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118959107807 0.122223957237 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0557620817844 0.0403219363162 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43852619211 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0371747211896 0.0326786765898 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00743494423792 0.00163938923432 454% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.104089219331 0.0861751148067 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0297397769517 0.0214082191602 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185873605948 0.0119246538136 156% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1446.0 1933.38276553 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 316.052104208 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80722891566 6.10592293882 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20519365927 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33064516129 0.37474360046 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241935483871 0.284197041944 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181451612903 0.203843217982 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0927419354839 0.137313986986 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43852619211 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.560935902166 106% => OK
Word variations: 61.6015465642 60.7401812628 101% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0911823647 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5454545455 20.7725350517 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5654122018 49.5273876611 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4131274131 93.4120437189 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.5328185328 15.2821509519 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.42471042471 0.594174754866 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.39078156313 137% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01102204409 100% => OK
Readability: 46.7390029326 49.1922392462 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.58823529412 1.69127372897 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.372909180754 0.332604825255 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105696425359 0.102734651613 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.043651247619 0.0668474354756 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.683001415015 0.534917948617 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18826533565 0.148666948902 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16630522053 0.13441755203 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790728053466 0.0742828286743 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.21850162243 0.324241079732 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0456104464802 0.0640056729886 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217188393835 0.22793763319 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563643313789 0.0582452615562 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.88977955912 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.493987976 86% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 65.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9