Some people insist that senior workers 65 or over should retire but others believe that they should continue working. What is you opinion?

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Some people insist that senior workers 65 or over should retire but others believe that they should continue working. What is you opinion?

Over the past few decades [In the past], there have been many advances in medical technology. Because of this, senior citizens are healthier and more active than before and may choose to work beyond the age of 65. Nowadays, however, there has been a growing debate as to whether or not these people should retire in order to create jobs for the younger generation. Despite the advantages of early retirement, I strongly believe that it is better for senior workers to continue working as long as they are physically and mentally capable.

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