Some people say that the best way to improve public health is to increase the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required.
The ample of sport facilities is the way to maintain good health. While the salient fact is acceptable, others deem that it less effective for the government in purpose to increase the public health. I believe that different measures should be considered.
Improving sport facilitates such as sport hall and fitness center may motivate people to take care of their health. As government effort to increase public health, such facilities are provided in vicinity and effected people enable do sport easily. However, this movement includes some demerits for several groups. In the case of the employees who spend most of their time to work, do sport regularly may impossible. While for moderate class, doing sport in fitness center is difficult due to the limited budget.
On the other hand, exercise alone cannot improve the standard of public health. It can be seen nowadays that the availability of tobaccos, high-fat products and alcohols threat people to live unhealthy. Another health problems is commonly engaged with life stress. Results show that approximately 85 percent of physical disease closely related to the mental stress, and the numerous cases recorded in develop countries. To overcome these problems, charging a high tax for un-health products and providing an affordable psychological services may stand as effective ways, and indirectly increase the public health statues.
In conclusion, building some sport facilities can be one of the steps to increase the public health. While the health is not come just physically, I believe that government can take another steps in the way to promote people’s health such as taking high taxes for unhealthy products and providing accessible mental services.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-03 | Saeed Najd Ataei | 56 | view |
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 95
- As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes.Why does this happen?How does this affect society? 80
- What do you feel will be most popular career choices for young people in your country in the next five years? Explain your answer with examples 80
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to reach successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school both views and give your opinion 85
- The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006 45
it less effective for the government in purpose to increase
it is less effective for the government in the purpose to increase
As government effort to increase public health,
Definitions of effort
noun
a vigorous or determined attempt.
"hammer birdhouses to country fenceposts in an effort to bring back the eastern bluebird"
synonyms: attempt, try, endeavor, crack, shot, stab, essay
enable do sport easily
enable to do sports easily
do sport regularly may impossible.
doing sport regularly may be impossible.
Another health problems is
Another health problem is
85 percent of physical disease closely related to the mental stress,
85 percent of physical diseases are closely related to the mental stress,
and the numerous cases recorded in develop countries
and the numerous cases are recorded in developing/developed countries
While the health is not come just physically
While the health is not coming just physically
While the health does not come just physically
can take another steps
can take another step
can take other steps
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 271 350
No. of Characters: 1418 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.057 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.232 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.398 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5