Some people say that noise made by people should be strictly controlled while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The issue of noise is widely discussed around the world nowadays. Some feel it is an essential source of pollution which should be restricted, while others argue with them. In my opinion, the first approach is more beneficial both for individuals and the society.
We must acknowledge that pollution influences all of us, and noise contributes it greatly. Young people prefer listening to loud music which older people find irritating. For example, my son’s favourite group was “Rammstein”, and when the volume of the music was too high and I asked him to turn it down, he always re...
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