Some people think that child care centres provide the best services for children of pre school age.other working parents think that family members such as grand parents will be better careers for their kids.discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that child care centres provide the best services for children of pre school age.other working parents think that family members such as grand parents will be better careers for their kids.discuss both views and give your opinion.

We are living in the age of materialism where everything is on the pace. Building child career is very essential for every parents. For some childcare centres provide best service. But other thinks that family members like grandparents provide better career for their little ones. As we know that both points have equal strength. So, personally i hold the view that, before giving priority to any idea we can puzzle over this.

Prima facie, I am making a beeline that child care centres offer more facility for their children's career. From the variety of teachers, child can learn primary study and alphabets etc. Moving ahead, I deem that they are specially maintained for child's future. Their are multitudes of child there where child learns by seeing other child learning. Probing further, child can be developed by variety of comfortability available there.

On the flip side, Family members such as grand parents also play a vital role in child development. It has been said that what children learn from their family members cannot be learn from others.In these days, parents are busy because of their jobs, so their children are developed by their grandparents. Little ones brought up in child care centres have less feelings towards their parents. Moving on, love and knowledge got from grand parents always lead to useful for their career.

At last, I think that there are strong arguments towards each view point but issue is to finding more appropriate view among them. Finally , I make out that due to less time wealthy parents opinion, grand parents are best choice for their development. And we can not say worst about child care centres because they give parent's little ones an early age development.

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for every parents.
for every parent.

But other thinks that
But others think that

always lead to useful for their career.
always lead to be useful for their career.

grand parents are best choice
grand parents are the best choice

Their are multitudes of child there
There are multitudes of children there

Sentence: Finally , I make out that due to less time wealthy parents opinion, grand parents are best choice for their development.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to time and wealthy

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