Some people think that children should learn to obey and do as parents and teachers say. Others think that this kind of upbringing will not prepare our children for real life.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that children should learn to obey and do as parents and teachers say. Others think that this kind of upbringing will not prepare our children for real life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an argument being put forward by some that children should act upon what their parents and teachers are telling them to do, whilst other opposed this kind of approach as it does not reflect the realism of the actual word. In my opinion, although the former may have some logical rationale as to why it is being considered, I believe it may actually have some drawbacks to it.

To begin, it is indisputable that the agenda of the parents and teachers in guiding younger individuals are really for the best interest of the children, according to few. It is believed that if at an early age t...

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