Some people think that governments should invest more in public services instead of wasting money on arts such as music and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Public services and the arts are two different entities. Public services involve providing accessibility to different resources such as transportation, leisure and other health and wellness aspects. On the other hand, arts is about music, paintings and other pieces of expression. In our society, there are people who argue that the government should spend less on arts and use more funds for public services. In my opinion, it is agreeable that more investments should be put on public services.
First and foremost, I believe that it will always be the people's health, safety and security that c...
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