Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles. Others feel that it is important to give one’s mind a rest in leisure time. Discuss and give your opinion.
Leisure time is certainly one of the most important aspects of people’s lives. Some people support the idea that it is more important to spend it doing activities that improve the mind while others are of the opinion that it is more worthwhile to put the mind to rest in leisure time. This short essay will explore both perspectives and then present a personal view on this issue.
A variety of benefits can be put forward for spending leisure time doing activities that develop the mind. Take for example the habit of reading in leisure time. One clear benefit is that it allows a person to lea...
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 336 350
No. of Characters: 1640 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.281 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.881 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.507 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.929 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.358 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.54 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5