Some people think that some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult for children to learn at school. They think that these subjects should be made optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Schools play a vital role in shaping students’ career. Most of the primary and secondary schools teach several significant subjects that act as a base in students’ life. However, a section of pupils neglects subjects such as Mathematics and Philosophy since they feel them a quite harder. So, it is arguable that these studies are not to be made mandatory. From my perspective, I partially agree with this notion and I opine that Mathematics should be taught necessarily whereas Philosophy as an optional.
At the outset, the significance of Mathematical teaching in schools is taken into accou...
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adapting Maths as a part of the curriculum is not only beneficial for pursuing career and improving competency in aptitude, but it also very advantageous in many circumstances
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