Task2: in some countries it's easy to get a credit card. People have problem with giving money back . Do u think advantages of credit card r outweight disadvantages?
From a decade, credit card has become an effective and preferred choice among all bank card schemes. Although, in some cases, people feel it hard to return back the borrowed amount from the card, Its advantaged outweighs the negatives due to fact that it has convenience, its better mortgage and ownership facilities. In this essay, I will content these reasons in more detail and reasonably.
Credit card is an efficient scheme that benefits both to its users and credit card companies. Firstly, this is a secure and easy to us way of payment. For example, credit card often comes with a secure p...
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Sentence: Although, in some cases, people feel it hard to return back the borrowed amount from the card, Its advantaged outweighs the negatives due to fact that it has convenience, its better mortgage and ownership facilities.
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Suggestion: Refer to advantaged and outweighs
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Sentence: With careful, alert and secure use of card, is positives always outweigh its negatives.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and positives
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 445 350
No. of Characters: 2142 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.593 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.813 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.468 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 164 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.153 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5