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There are more problems with students' behaviour in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
Nowadays, there is a trend that the number of problem students. who behave aggressively and selfishly, is increasing rapidly these years. In this essay, I will discuss probable causes of the phenomenon and practical solutions to it.
The main cause comes from upbringing. The economic condition of modern families has been greatly improved and most families has only one child, which means that parents would definitely satisfy their child’s demand, regardless of price. As a result, emotional development is usually ignored and young people today are spoilt and self-centred. When they grow up t...
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that the number of problem students. who behave aggressively and selfishly,
that the number of problem students, who behave aggressively and selfishly,
and most families has only one child,
and most families have only one child,
Sentence: As a result, emotional development is usually ignored and young people today are spoilt and self-centred.
Error: spoilt Suggestion: spoiled
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