Today, the advanced science and technology have made great changes to people’s life, but artists such as musicians, painters and writers are still highly valued. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
The issues of advanced science, technology and its influence are widely discussed around the world. Anyway, talented artists, musicians and writers are still highly appreciated in society. They can evoke emotions in people’s hearts that no technology can ever do.
It is true that the latest achievements in science and technology have changed our life completely. We can hardly spend a single day without using modern gadgets, such as mobile phones, computers and TV sets. We cannot underestimate all this equipment, because it gives us a possibility of unlimited communication in any ...
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Another reason is it is a free source of tntertainment. For instance, we are able to listen to our favourite music, read the books and watch any movies and documentaries online.
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For some wealthy people is is a justified investment, but for millions it is an eternal source of inspiration.
'is is' mentioned twice that too consecutively
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We can hardly spend a single day without using modern gadgets, such as mobile phones, computers and TV sets. We cannot underestimate all this equipment, because it gives us a possibility of unlimited communication in any time and any place.
We cannot underestimate all 'these' 'equipments' since you are refering to gadgets
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