Today people spend more time travelling to work than before.Some people suggest employers should allow employees to do some work from home.Do you think that advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is universally acknowledged that "Work is Workship". People earn their back and belly by carrying out jobs which, sometimes, are far away from their home which consume much time to reach there. It has been controversial that whether allowing employees to carry out some work at home will bring benefits or effect adversly. Here, I would like to assert that this phenomenon offer more pros than cons.
Multifarious points can be put down to shore up my view.To set in, people work round the clock in office and travelling long distances often make them tedious and less energetic. Thus, relaxed s...
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Comments
How is coherence and
How is coherence and conciseness ?????
r the ideas fully developed nicely ???
how is overall performance except grammar mistakes ?
Everything is OK. A good
Everything is OK. A good student.
But still need to put punctuation marks properly.
Sentence: It has been controversial that whether allowing employees to carry out some work at home will bring benefits or effect adversly.
Error: adversly Suggestion: adversely
Sentence: In addition to it, employees could priorly access the whole work at home on various criterias.
Error: criterias Suggestion: criteria
Error: priorly Suggestion: priory
flaws:
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1860 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.041 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.564 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.062 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.425 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5