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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
do you agree or disagree?
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Sentence: There are varied points to shore up the point of negative impactc.
Error: impactc Suggestion: impact
Sentence: Consequently, the sedentary lifestyle would cause the unhealth to the physical development.
Error: unhealth Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: There is evidence indicating that 90 students with bad study achievement are fanscinated in playing computer games all day long.
Error: fanscinated Suggestion: fascinated
Sentence: For a youngster without cooking experience, he or she could easy to capture how to cook by viewing the relatived viedo, which will guide you step by step with sounds and pictures.
Error: relatived Suggestion: relatives
Error: viedo Suggestion: video
Sentence: To conclude, we could not live without compter in present high technology society, parents should encourage children using computer in a positive way to help their study and life, instead of banning the computer using.
Error: compter Suggestion: computer
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 308 350
No. of Characters: 1567 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.189 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.088 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.674 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.348 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5