1. The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Culture is the way of life of a particular set of people. Although there are other effective ways of understanding a culture, most people believe that to get accustomed to different cultures, the most effective way is to get jobs and work in an international establishment. I totally agree with this opinion because it gives opportunity for a broader exposure and accustomisation to the culture that wants to be learned.
Firstly, employment in an international organisation exposes one to different cultures. In an organisation, there are a lot of people who hail from different continents of the world of which cultural diversity will be an advantage to one who is interested. For instance, the United kingdom is recently employing medical practitioners especially nurses from non-EU countries. A nurse who will work in this kind of setting will have the opportunity to meet new people and make friends. Hence, they have opportunity to learn their languages and some other material aspect of their culture.
Secondly, migration is likely to occur due to the nature of one's job. Someone who gained employment in an organisation located internationally might decide to migrate for proximity and other beneficial reasons which in turn will make them get accustomed to the culture of the people, the language,food etc. For instance, my aunt one taught in a school in Berlin, Germany some years back and her employment made her family migrate. This gave her the opportunity to learn her dream language, German and also get well accustomed to their culture. For this reason, it is thought that the best method to understand a culture is by working for multinational companies.
In conclusion, amongst other ways of learning culture such as through lectures and the internet, I believe the best way to understand a culture is through gaining employment in a multinational establishment because it gives better opportunity for getting exposure and accustomed to the way of life of the people.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17956656347 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14531885521 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495356037152 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0854804864 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239574065346 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845423144334 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923118309503 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168243475126 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686882375831 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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