One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of individuals believing in the previous century when human astronaut first arrived on Moon they said it is a big step for mankind, while others oppose it by saying that it makes no difference or no change in human daily life. In my opinion the former apprehension seems to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my vieThe most prepows in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with there are deluges of arguments in favour of that when humans landed on moon for the very first time.The technology that put men on the moon, launched space shuttles and will build a space station has found its way into everyday life on earth. Common secondary uses of space research are called spin-offs. The common smoke detector used in homes was first prepared for spacecrafts as a warning system. Computer bar codes in retail stores, shock absorbing shoes used by tennis players and athletes, lightweight materials used for helmets and sporting materials and non stick coating used in pans were all first developed as part of space research.
Furthermore another pivotal aspect of above aforementioned proposition it only likely to help in one excel and thrive in varied areas such as upcoming life. To make it justifiable there are several study has been conducted for the upcoming generation that are clearly indicate that the way that humans polluting planet earth. This is clear indication that the life on earth for mankind will no longer suitable. In order to face that problem there are several space organisations that are making efforts to make life possible on other planets. There are few example like Space-x that is organised by Elon musk and NASA are the most popular examples of these. Apart from this it may not be noticeable that the landing on Moon did not effect the daily life much or not. But if anyone analyse it properly then they can understand the big effect that was only possible with the help of landing on humans. Hence, It is crucial and critical for the development for the society.
To conclude having pondered over above stated, I pen down saying that space exploration and research has touched our everyday lives in numerous ways. So, it definitely is a big step for mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... landed on moon for the very first time.The technology that put men on the moon, la...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...developed as part of space research. Furthermore another pivotal aspect of above aforeme...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun study seems to be countable; consider using: 'several studies'.
Suggestion: several studies
... life. To make it justifiable there are several study has been conducted for the upcoming gen...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indicated'.
Suggestion: indicated
...he upcoming generation that are clearly indicate that the way that humans polluting plan...
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Line 5, column 733, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ceable that the landing on Moon did not effect the daily life much or not. But if any...
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Line 5, column 739, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the landing on Moon did not effect the daily life much or not. But if anyon...
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Line 5, column 783, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'analyses'.
Suggestion: analyses
...e daily life much or not. But if anyone analyse it properly then they can understand th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, then, while, apart from, as to, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86989795918 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52380250448 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573979591837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5765025678 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.294117647 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253378526311 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728228748508 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846212711072 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151422589031 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640511597374 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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