One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that few individuals get into debt by buying products that they do not require and they are not financial stable to afford these kind of things. There is a wide range of factors that accounts for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied by providing some effective measures are taken.
To commence with, there are deluges of reasons of this soaring concerns. The most preponderant one is that strong algorithm model that has been used by businesses. To elaborate it, before advertisement companies get feedback from their customers, after that with the help of software engineers they design strong advertisement that people cannot ignore. This is because these advertisements is design on the knowledge of masses that they provided while giving feedback.When they see these kind of advertisement they cannot ignore products. As a result, they successfully buy these kind of products even without thinking weather they need it or not. It cannot only contribute to financial burden after buying products, but also leads to numerous other other catastrophic impacts in various fields. Besides, people who are unhappy think retail therapy will help them. For instance the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicates that advertising and retail therapy are the biggest reason of people get into debt by buying things that they do not need and cannot afford. Needless to say, all these demerits have far reaching impacts on society.
Steps to deal with this problem are many the most effective one's are not remote and complicated but practicable and accessible. The primary one lies in the fact that higher authorities had better slap a ban on unwanted feedback that steal individuals information by implementing rigorous rules and regulations. Moreover the government had better organise awareness camps to educate public on retail therapy. Only when convergent efforts are taken by all sectors, this problem can be overcome.
To conclude, dealing with few masses get into debt by buying things that they do not need and not able to purchase them is one of the most prevalent issues that face almost all countries by collective efforts of individuals and government this problem can be overcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Suggestion: When
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat they provided while giving feedback.When they see these kind of advertisement th...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: other
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, moreover, so, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17010309278 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74166240115 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1053529493 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345608923237 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100493661014 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798281820153 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216696029419 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633452946377 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.