1. More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is often argued that there has been a significant increase in the number of people’s desire for well-known brands with outfit, car and other items. In my opinion, although there are some negative consequences of this trend, it should be considered as a positive development in the society.
As more and more people tend to purchase luxurious commodity, several related causes can be anticipated. Firstly, many youngsters do not take into consideration carefully and make impulsive purchase because they want to possess the highest status items, which sometimes can sink them into financial issues. For example, it is a common phenomenon when seeing a woman buying a dress she never wears or a man purchasing a new car on a monthly basis. Secondly, inhabitants tend to live in a consumerism society that they consider only by frittering away a plethora of money for new items can lead to happiness.
Furthermore, I strongly believe that buying prevalent brands exerts positive impacts upon people’s lives. It cannot be denied that reputable brands provide customers with high quality products and reliability, resulting in a sense of satisfaction among them. Nike, for instance, has supplied buyers with convenient sneakers for many purposes such as: playing tennis, hiking and running. Also, Iphone is one of the most famous brands worldwide by virtue of its durability and world-class security. Furthermore, more things purchased motivated people to work harder to meet their demands in life. Therefore, they will make a huge contribution to the prosperity and wealth of their nations.
In conclusion, although many people think that buying famous brands is harmful, I personally reckon that the advantages of this trend far outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35125448029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98320732715 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659498207885 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.622728149 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288602599662 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837791545599 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574258431472 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160050427252 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295918967943 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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