Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others think that it is a threat to life on earth. Discuss both views.
Some people often argue that genetic engineering has now become a vital problem in modern society and it can exert great impacts upon people’s lives in many aspects. In my opinion, however, I strongly believe that these negatives far outweighed these positive ones.
On the one hand, I agree that genetic engineering has brought certain values to our human lives. Firstly, some genetically modified crops grow much more quickly. This phenomenon plays a fundamental role in increasing farmers’ incomes and their living standard. Secondly, scientists can utilize this methodology to produce vaccines and drugs to cure diseases. Therefore, such kinds of inherited illnesses would no longer exist and there would be a constant increase in life expectancy worldwide. Finally, it is of greatly possible to clone human organs as we could have replacement body parts such as heart, lung and so on. Take an example of people with pain sufferings from their hearts, researchers can double one heart from normal people to help them become stronger again.
On the other hand, this methodology does more harm to people than good. From an ethical perspective, opponents show their concerns towards its effects later as it is unnatural. To be more specific, clones might even be developed just for organ replacements. In fact, it is considered unacceptable in most regions and human genetic engineering is even prohibited worldwide.
In conclusion, although there are some people approve the use of genetic engineering due to its benefits, I personally reckon that it is not appropriate as it is unnatural and unethical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30739299611 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89060279013 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669260700389 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8613141532 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214828038939 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637837573548 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695436927389 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134274732227 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420976443805 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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