Opinions are divided into whether hobbies should be difficult to be entertaining. From my perspective, I completely disagree with the view and uphold that simple hobbies can also be of great fun.
Having a hobby which requires much patience and are to complete may be enjoyable to some extent. First, when finishing it, it will award people with a overwhelming feeling of conquer. Secondly, although individuals can not be satisfied as soon as achieving these difficult hobbies, the benefits of them can last for a considerably long period of time. For instance, when someone finishes a marathon, he or she may not feel fulfilled and entertained instantly . However, according to solid evidence stemming for scientific research, people who continue running marathon are expected to have a longer life expectancy than those who do not run.
However, hobbies that are less difficult also bring people countless happiness. For one thing, the simpler the hobby is, the easier it can be accomplished. The achievements of the simple hobby give rise to a huge sense of fulfillment, which can be even stronger than completing a hard task. For another, easy-handled hobbies are more sustainable than their counterparts, resulting in the persistence of human beings. For example, it is much more achievable for people to walk their dogs everyday, while it is only a slim chance to run a marathon once a day. Thus, compared with difficult tasks, individuals are less likely to give up simple hobbies.
In conclusion, although difficult hobbies are able to offer some joy for individuals, there are no big difference between hard and easy hobbies because the latter can also bring about happiness and entertainment.
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Why could this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 78
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- Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other while others think that people are now more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...finishing it, it will award people with a overwhelming feeling of conquer. Second...
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Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...f them can last for a considerably long period of time. For instance, when someone finishes a ...
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Line 2, column 458, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...feel fulfilled and entertained instantly . However, according to solid evidence st...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...chievable for people to walk their dogs everyday, while it is only a slim chance to run ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18115942029 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95667208843 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.429391713 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274453385711 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10271884889 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817891996383 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1771732137 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606029496028 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.