It is under heated debate that schools are no longer needed thanks to the versatile internet. From my perspective, I agree with this to some extent, but I do not think it is the case that everyone can study at home instead of entering a school.
It is an excellent way for students to digest knowledge better and build relationships with others when they learn at school. For instance, if someone is a physics student, it is a must for him to do some experiments at labs under professors’ instruction to help him fully understand the physical theories. However, when studying through the internet alone, he can barely comprehend physics's true nature and beauty but face the lifeless words. Moreover, not only can schools avail us to acquiring knowledge better, but also they are second-to-none environments to construct relationships with others. Compared with the phenomenon of the workplace, the atmosphere of schools is more unsophisticated, which means friendships in schools are more about the resemblance of minds in preference to the appeal of interest.
Nevertheless, there are also many setbacks in schools, including the ignorance of students’ respective demands for curriculum courses. It is criticized by the mainstream that the course organization in schools does not take every student’s personal need into consideration. For instance, one is adept at English while poor at math, while the other student does the contrary. Conspicuously, the school is supposed to arrange more math classes for the former student and set fewer for the latter. However, in today’s schools, they are not able to own a suitable curriculum but have to take time-wasting courses, which is detrimental to students’ individual growth.
In conclusion, either studying at school or on the internet has advantages and disadvantages. Thus, I partly agree with the perception that schools should be replaced by the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'school'
Suggestion: school
... lifeless words. Moreover, not only can schools avail us to acquiring knowledge better,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28431372549 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15066069611 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3502157716 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211496006316 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803131858708 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717613782613 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165138851119 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834565818872 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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