The world has seen thousands of advancement and developments in all areas that humanity involves in between the 20th century and 21st century, a few of people nevertheless think otherwise. In my view, I do believe that humanity has done such a great job on some areas such as healthcare, science and technology besides some limits on environment and medicine.
On the one hand, healthcare system has now developed significantly since 100 years earlier. For instance, infant mortality has been on a huge reduction and life expectancy of human has also been on the increase. People today can live up to 80 or 90 years old, even over 100 years old and there are more and more centenarians these days. Additionally, achievements in science and technology have raised the life quality of people up to a new level. For example, patients with limb loss can now be transplanted with robotic body parts and the birth of social networks has not only brought people all over the world together but also promoted the world's business.
On the other hand, developments in science and technology have simultaneously led to many devastating consequences for environment which is alarmingly at risk from air, soil, water and plastic pollution, from melting glaciers, from rising sea level and from the increasing extinction of wildlife. Besides, the medicine abuse has resulted in the spreading of anti-biotic resistance which can lead to serious disability or even death.
In conclusion, it is true that humanity has been making a huge progress with numerous achievements and breakthroughs in all aspects of life but yet there are loads of unsolved problems to work on such as severely damaged environment and the emerge of anti-biotic resistance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge progress'.
Suggestion: huge progress
...t is true that humanity has been making a huge progress with numerous achievements and breakthr...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uch as severely damaged environment and the emerge of anti-biotic resistance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1161971831 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98555629981 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2223921026 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.3 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180713580684 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668947526432 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428094355133 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986822752734 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586720303702 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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