1. Buying things on the Internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages ?
Nowadays, many online shoppers are able to purchase their goods more easily and quickly due to the prevalence of the Internet. While I believe that shopping on the Internet has many benefits, a few disadvantages might deter customers from buying goods online.
On the other hand, it is true that the emergence of social networking website and shopping applications such as Facebook, Instagram or Shopee application have revolutionized the way people purchase goods in convenient ways. For instance, regardless of the brick and mortar stores with fixed hours, online shopping venues are available to shoppers any time of the day and night. It is especially useful for mothers with babies, people who are housebound or people who work days. Moreover, online stores have diversity of goods choices which are overwhelmingly abundant. The customers can simultaneously have comparisons about the prices, the quality and the quantity of products in the different online stores without spending too much to move.
However, there are some drawbacks of shopping online should be mentioned. Firstly, when you want to shop clothing items, you can not feel the material by trying them on. Unless the shoppers know exactly their measurements and are familiar with the brand of clothing offered, this could end up being a bad experience. Secondly, the customers can not always be given the detailed product information or replying for individual questions instantly if the famous stores have enormous fans. Sometimes it takes 24 hours to get the answers
In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain many benefits from shopping online than we buy goods from offline stores.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24060150376 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78378318301 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2824787962 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110392016119 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388241063345 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399384688177 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715842412393 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477795872831 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.