1. Some people say that computer have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computer have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reason and example to support your answer.
During this technology world human life's are becoming more easier and comfortable. As we know the computer and other related product such as mobile phone, email internet has significant impact of human living style.
As on the topic becoming questionable whether it's make positive or negative interfere in people life. From my point of view computers have made our life more convenient. Its helps us in our daily work for example the access ability of world news are possible from any ware due to the computer and internet. Likewise, computers increased the efficiency of factory workers. Huge amount of production has been possible due to the technology. It is also very helpful on education sector, our teaching system becoming smarter students study and thinking level are in next level. Computers have wild range of coverage on human activities we can use it in financial sector, banking sector. Some impossible tasks become possible because of computers.
On the other hand, it has also some side effect, social lives of people are affected; we are only thing about our business or work. Parents did not have time for their child and families. The crime rate has been increased, such as now days the cyber crime has on the pick. Peoples especially adults attract with each other through social media without proper knowing. It caught the crime like murder or rape.
As a conclusion, there were some negative impacts of technology but now days these items are part of our life. Without it we can't imagine our daily life. So I believe if we use our compute or other electronic devices properly, it is our friend if not it becoming our anemia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...chnology world human lifes are becoming more easier and comfortable. As we know the compute...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s become possible because of computers. On the other hand, it has also some side...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t caught the crime like murder or rape. As a conclusion, there were some negativ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ems are part of our life. Without it we cant imagine our daily life. So I believe if...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r friend if not it becoming our anemia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93906810036 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47391810868 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7346735634 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232311620787 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07055563688 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727335694168 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130833284703 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461447584977 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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