6 , It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole.
Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?
With the development of transportation technology systems, traveling to remote areas is an unreachable dream anymore. Although this trend can greatly contribute to the development of science and tourism, it also has some drawbacks. This essay will analyze both the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Regarding positive effects, coming to the corner of the world can offer the spectacular views and great experience that tourist can never see before which motivate they to Pack-and-Go . from the scientist’s point of views, this kind of travel gives them opportunities to search for more extensive knowledge about the world like human, weather, Clara, and laura… the Sahara desert, where The Great Pyramid of Giza located, provide a prime example when it remains many important historical pieces of evidence like the body of pharaoh which was buried in sumptuous graves, statues, and the other items of one of the oldest civilization of the word let alone the great feelings of physically exposed to eye-catching architecture.
Despite the benefits, this trend has some potential drawbacks. Firstly, people run the rocks for their health when they come to the remote area and harsh weather like pole or mountainous areas, where they are not familiar with. Amazon, for example, can bring you many dangerous insects which attack you simultaneously. Furthermore, this traveling also requires a great deal of money for commute and other stuff, it, therefore, does not go with some on budget.
In conclusion, this trend of travel bring advantages to outweigh the drawbacks .it would be best if the scientist was fund enough and take caution to their health during the journey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29850746269 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82073592895 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.637722557 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138010041886 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548997094414 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338802714952 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889898311349 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260135286031 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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