According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average ‘holiday’ is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want excitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people working in the tourism industry argue that the way of having holiday and relaxing are transforming as people are looking for adventurous and unique activities rather than spending their vacations in peaceful countryside. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
On one hand, along with globalization, people have to cope with heavy workloads and rarely have time for relaxation, even if they have, it’s just a short vacation within two or three days at most. Moreover, people are obsessed with work and hardly can they arrange for a long vacation. For this reason, people don’t want to spend time and money on a luxurious, relaxing break at a five-star hotel in a far-away country. Instead, they prefer to take part in some sports such as bungee, scuba diving or skydiving, which are more exciting and money-saving.
On the other hand, nowadays, the young generation is filled with YOLO spirit, which means You Only Live Once or live life to its fullest. Hence, adventure holidays come to them as innovative solutions to experience life and escape from boring work life. Participants are often seeking dangerous sports that bring a sort of thrills, which they can not get in ordinary life. Furthermore, activities like rock climbing or trekking not only bring physical exercise but also mental refreshment, which can energize the body and mind for better performance.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly agree that people are keen on joining special and challenging holidays rather than taking traditional vacations.
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23320158103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75551624069 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656126482213 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5478731687 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185697315499 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660066728794 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716131432696 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125828184569 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571206306662 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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