Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore, working hours should be reduced.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Without a doubt, the search for manual workforce has decreased since the involvement of technological advancements and automation. Accordingly, people believe a cut in working hours is necessary. However, I completely disagree with this opinion.
To begin with, the decrease of working hours has made many adverse impacts on the economy and government in a long run. Nowadays, automation is mostly applied in installation process. In the past, these jobs were usually inclined to be executed by the low class of society. If working time is being reduced, the blue-collar worker will be subjected to suffer from such risks as salary cut or even workforce downsizing. As a result, the gap between the rich and the poor will be increase significantly over time. Consequently, lower income means less money to spend. This will lead to imbalance between the demand and supply of the market. In addition, the tax which collected from worker’s income will become limited which means there are less sustainable funds to support infrastructure.
Moreover, lowering the amount of working hours will degenerate human society. The factors that drive a society forward are working, creative and exploration. Cutting down a person’s working hours can obsess them with the thought that they are made redundant, as all the job can be done with the help of machinery. The idea will grow and expand continuously through generations. Take the movie Wall-E for as an example. In the movie, there is a society where artificial intelligent and machinery do all the works and people just become fat and lazy. This could be the potential of our society as well if we reducing the involvement of human in working process.
It is far from clear how and when the result of reducing working hours will impact us. Like all other new ideas, it take time to be proven correct or not. At present, I believe the idea should not be adopted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21978021978 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.175824175824 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0824175824176 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467032967033 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0247252747253 0.0437548338989 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115384615385 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0631868131868 0.0403226058552 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84059245884 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192307692308 0.0326793684256 59% => OK
Particles: 0.00274725274725 0.00163938923432 168% => OK
Determiners: 0.107142857143 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0302197802198 0.021408717616 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0164835164835 0.011925033212 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1925.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03448275862 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35736677116 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275862068966 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181818181818 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119122257053 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84059245884 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.3384200687 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1904761905 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.419801782 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 42.776683087 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.61111111111 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296310353611 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0710625962624 0.102741220458 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0514488662573 0.0668466124924 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.465945359786 0.534860350844 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118164447539 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101864918274 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349751958097 0.0742795772207 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343470472349 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101257045956 0.0638462369009 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198494268527 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283088724208 0.058150111329 49% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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