the advantages and disadvantages of the shopping in supermarkets

Since the globalization , shopping or buying , goods and services has been increasing significantly , with introduction of innovative ways of delivering end products to the customers via a competition. In this context supermarket has reached to the peak by leading the market.

Everything available under one roof is a crucial advantage which enable customer to experience efficiency by saving both time and money. Possibility of parking customer's vehicle safely in huge vehicle parking areas available in almost all the supermarkets would be a another hassle free factor. Another advantage of being a supermarket customer is , availability of several payment methods such as cash,credit cards or through mobile apps.

Vise versa , there are adverse factors too can be highlighted pertaining to the shopping in supermarkets. Less price competitiveness as there are no competitors around will have a higher price range over the products available would have a negative effect on customers. It is proven that buying perishable goods such as fruits ,vegetables and etc in a small fare is more fresh than buying in supermarkets as the supermarkets are tend to store big quantities where small groceries store day to day sales.

As a conclusion , the advantages of shopping in supermarkets surpass the disadvantages of same, but it is customers responsibility to decide what their shopping destination is ,in day to day life.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44343891403 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28136174458 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628959276018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.511912718 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315384943606 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114764835113 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112152731506 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193455185466 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127339167634 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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