Due to contemporary lifestyles and technological improvements, global music has become more and more well-liked in recent years. As a result, traditional music is progressively losing its significance. Traditional music embodies a society's history, values, and customs, and its advantage cannot be denied. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favor of the latter.
On the one hand, there are several problems with traditional music nowadays. Originally, traditional music was transmitted orally, and many songs were never properly recorded or written down. Because of this, many of these songs have been lost to the ages throughout time, depriving future generations of the music. Since so many traditional songs haven't been recorded, locating and displaying them might be challenging. Secondly, because traditional music does not have copyright protection, modern musicians and others can sample and utilize the music without having to pay royalties. The artists who composed the original music were frequently not given credit for it, and as a result, their works were not recognized.
On the other hand, a nation's traditions and customs are represented by its traditional music. There are historical, societal, and even theological meanings hidden behind the music. Traditional music can also help people connect with their ancestors' cultural legacies. Therefore, it is essential and carries a nation's native customs and dignity. As a result, we must maintain our own traditional music, as it can inform us about our ancestors' history and lives, as well as who we are. For instance, several Indian holidays, such as Onam and Deepavali, have their own songs. Certain songs are exclusively played at these events.
Personally, I think that when anything is strongly tied to their heritage and culture, including music, people pay greater attention and express a higher degree of interest.
In summary, music is an essential part of our lives that both supports and heals our emotional states. The value of traditional music may be observed in its ability to preserve and transmit cultural traditions through generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in summary, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49101796407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88778003815 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601796407186 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.554214112 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38644538556 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122662715799 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961229195461 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208450998476 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752780260082 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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