Advantages and disadvantages of traditional music?
Traditional music is a type of music related to national culture, non-commercial and passed on from generation to generation. Owing to its symbolism, traditional music usually gains respect from most people. However, as with all development in today’s world, this musical genre has brought both benefits and drawbacks.
Admittedly, it is tangible that traditional music doesn't appeal to a wide range of audience. Practically, there is no denying that young people these days barely listen to folk songs, which is also true for me although I really want to get to know about this genre of music. Personally, I think the main cause of this trend is that traditional music can not catch up with the latest trends. To put simply, the fact that folk songs don’t match with youngsters’ instant styles may lead to them gradually disappearing in the future.
However, despite traditional music being out of fashion, its advantages can not be disregarded. Firstly, listeners can derive benefits from this type of music in terms of national history and culture. Take Red music - a genre of Vietnamese traditional music as an example, on the grounds that red music songs are stories narrated by soldiers who directly fought in Vietnam War, the audience can feel empathized with those being part of history, which can not be thoroughly delineated in any history books. Moreover, what makes traditional music special is the fact that it can unite the whole country. Obviously, not every single folk song is famous but some of them must be familiar to citizens because they are frequently played in some particular occasions or events, thus, this could act as a solidifying element that makes fellow-countrymen feel synchronized in some ways.
All things considered, although downsides of traditional music do exist, I firmly take the view that its benefits are more significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19078947368 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8937542209 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6508614376 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332069601748 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137386725183 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084587753194 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206781496846 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047500812435 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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