With the advent of technology that makes space communication easier, sending tourists into space is within our grasp, and many believe that a new tourism industry could be considerably enhanced in the years to come. Some related issues will be significantly affected, but I believe that it is an acceptable price to bring wealth and inspiration for future generations.
With the advent of technology that makes space communication easier, sending tourists into space is within our grasp, and many believe that a new tourism industry could be considerably enhanced in the years to come. Some related issues will be significantly affected, but I believe that it is an acceptable price to bring wealth and inspiration for future generations.
Space tourism could have major consequences related to the Earth’s climate and human problems. Scientists discovered that this move actually causes temperature at the South and North poles to grow, leading to sea level rise and global warming. This will result in the modification of normal weather patterns, bringing about more extreme weather and an increased frequency of severe storms namely hurricanes and typhoons. Furthermore, exploring the universe means that human beings have to accept the possible risk of damaging physical and mental health such as sleep disturbance and the feeling of isolation.
However, space tourism could effortlessly become a multibillion-dollar industry that will bring enormous wealth to every economies involved. Once orbital flights are arranged on a regular basis and made available for all civilians, an increasing number of individuals who aspire to have such an experience, will pour a great deal of money to travel into space. Moreover, new generations of engineers will be deeply inspired and they might come up with technological breakthroughs. Travelling into space was once an unreal concept until Neil Armstrong set foot on the surface of the moon. This touch motivated millions of young engineers and scientists to reach a new height in space technology, such as satellites and orbital space stations around the Earth. If space tourism were developed in the upcoming years, the world would possibly witness more advancements in technology.
In conclusion, I agree that the substantial benefits from space tourism are much more significant than its detrimental impact on some fields such as the environment
- Citizens have major impacts on preserving the environmental surroundings along with the authorities and prestigious enterprises Do you agree 89
- Citizens have major impacts on preserving the environmental surroundings along with the authorities and prestigious enterprises To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- With the advent of technology that makes space communication easier sending tourists into space is within our grasp and many believe that a new tourism industry could be considerably enhanced in the years to come Some related issues will be significantly 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67532467532 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34107158238 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626623376623 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8887379224 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0603423598283 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021261882316 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0154894844192 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335198135544 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114493534223 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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